RHH: What do you think of my improved flow?

Ive been listening to more artists and Ive expanded I guess, but idk
if I sound too much like a boy to be taken seriously or what?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gw4_MGx5qVo

btw, dont hate. this is my first song, I messed up in the end (so be
sure to stick around to hear it!), and I have no reason to be ashamed
of my work. So go ahead and hate if you want but Ill let you know now
it wont discourage me